I didn't realize that I'm so into this until I saw 'to be continued'!!! SO GOOD. I really like the story and the characters especially Robin! Looking forward for part 2 <3
This game was so good! I love your writing style, the premise, the characters, everything. The MC is perhaps the best part, she is so well written and funny, and just a joy to play. Can't wait for part 2!
Oh my God, this game. I cannot choose. Jay and Wren are both PERFECT and they're both PERFECT FOR HER. I thiiiink I'm more inclined towards Jay because uhM, brooding over-protective jealous bodyguard????? Yes, please. But they're both amazing routes.
I cannot wait for the second part! btw, is the setting in a specific century/year? It feels rather old, maybe early 20th century?
So overall I had a lot of fun with this game (it was kind of like playing an Ace Attorney game in reverse) but there didn't really seem to be a lot of romance in it. Will there be more in Part 2?
I’ve never seen that movie (though I might have to now, it looks interesting!), so it wasn’t intentional. Jay is actually being quite literal when he says that.
Absolutely loved part 1! Definitely have a thing for Jay, though I played through Wren's part too. Can't wait for part 2 - thanks for the awesome work!
i didn't know this is going to be in two parts so my heart sunk when the words "to be continued" appeared aaaa it's so good tho! i've already fallen for each character as well as the art. i can't wait for part 2!
Got to say it- I'm absolutely looking forward for part two! I loved seeing all of the characters and how they interact with each other. I can't wait to see more of the game!
Once I started playing this, I couldn't stop until I reached one of the pseudo-endings. I still need to get a the other three, but I. AM. IN LOVE. The art is fantastic to look at, the dialogue is so eloquently written, so many places literally had me laughing out loud. I really love how serious Jay is! But oh my... I think I am falling in love with Wren, especially after that dream flashback, so I am assuming I got on his route. It tugged my heartstrings. I'm a sucker for childhood friend routes lol. Here I thought it'd be different 'cause yo, Jay is a fantastic character, but then BAM! Wren's dream lol. Let's see what happens when I get the other 3 ends, but I thoroughly enjoyed Part 1 so far and looking forward to the second!
Thank you for appreciating Wren! I'm a little worried he'll be overshadowed by Jay in this part because of the nature of his interactions with Robin. He's got his good points, too!
Honestly you did well in crafting 2 really excellent guys!! Which I think is great, since it'll encourage players to really want all those endings, and not just for completion, but because it's gonna be amazing~ Jay is fun because of his unrest and banter with Robin, buuut, Wren has this special charm and the little "game" between him and Robin keeps me in suspense, like what will happen if Robin falters? Wren is quite smart, and has a high chance of winning against Robin methinks. It's all so well crafted for a simple story that takes place on a train!
I'm pretty fond of the bad ends (not to mention they give a little extra background on the plot and characters), so I hope you're right and people do seek them out!
As for Wren, well... a glimpse of how he would feel if Robin lost can be seen in his bad end.
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I didn't realize that I'm so into this until I saw 'to be continued'!!! SO GOOD. I really like the story and the characters especially Robin! Looking forward for part 2 <3
Thanks for playing! I’m excited to share part 2!
This is so delightful! I enjoyed it very much! Really like the characters and story!
I’m glad you liked it! Thanks for playing.
I loved this game! I'm so excited for part 2! <3
thanks for playing! :)
Man this was awesome! Thanks for letting me play as a badass yet relatable character like Robin!
Oh and must I add her being straightly charming for an hour. Those boys really need a lot to catch up. ;)
Part 2, I'm patiently waiting for you.
Both guys could definitely learn a thing or two from Robin in the charm department. Thanks for playing!
Playing as a genuinely devious but charming lady like Robin is such a rare treat. Read all of Part 1 and eagerly on the lookout for Part 2.
I appreciate it! I prefer protagonists who are their own person as opposed to blank slates who just go with the flow.
This game was so good! I love your writing style, the premise, the characters, everything. The MC is perhaps the best part, she is so well written and funny, and just a joy to play. Can't wait for part 2!
Thanks so much! I’m glad you like Robin, she’s very fun to write.
Oh my God, this game. I cannot choose. Jay and Wren are both PERFECT and they're both PERFECT FOR HER. I thiiiink I'm more inclined towards Jay because uhM, brooding over-protective jealous bodyguard????? Yes, please. But they're both amazing routes.
I cannot wait for the second part! btw, is the setting in a specific century/year? It feels rather old, maybe early 20th century?
Thanks for playing! I know jealous love interests can be divisive, but I have such a soft spot for them.
As for the setting- You’re basically right! It’s a fantasy world, but it’s (very) loosely set in the 1910-1920s.
I have only one question. How can I wait for second part now? This game is too awesome. I absolutely love it! (☆ω☆)
I’m excited to share the rest of the story, so hopefully you won’t have to wait too long! Thanks for playing!
Thank you for your wonderful work!
So overall I had a lot of fun with this game (it was kind of like playing an Ace Attorney game in reverse) but there didn't really seem to be a lot of romance in it. Will there be more in Part 2?
I'm happy you thought the game was fun! There will certainly be more romance coming in part 2.
Also (forgot to ask this the first time)-is the whole garden thing a Motel Hell reference?
I’ve never seen that movie (though I might have to now, it looks interesting!), so it wasn’t intentional. Jay is actually being quite literal when he says that.
Absolutely loved part 1! Definitely have a thing for Jay, though I played through Wren's part too. Can't wait for part 2 - thanks for the awesome work!
I’m glad you liked it, thanks for playing!
Had lots of fun playing through this! Absolutely in love with Jay. he's just my type of guy lmao!
Can't wait for the second part *O*
Also woop
The top of her head is a mess, let's just pretend we don't see that. kbye. >.<
Ohmygosh, I've never gotten fanart before! She looks so pretty in your style T-T Thank you!
Jay's personality type is my guilty pleasure, so I'm glad you liked him!
i didn't know this is going to be in two parts so my heart sunk when the words "to be continued" appeared aaaa it's so good tho! i've already fallen for each character as well as the art. i can't wait for part 2!
oh no, I’m so sorry! I’m glad you liked everyone and are looking forward to part 2, though!
I'm caught and can't wait to see how the story unfolds!
The characters, plot and art are all great and create an enjoyable package. Thank you!
ah, thank you! I’m excited to work on and share part 2!
Gahhh I loved it so much! So excited for the second part!
Thanks, I’m glad you liked it!
Definitely got me hooked and wanting for more!
Thank you! I’ll do my best to deliver!
Got to say it- I'm absolutely looking forward for part two! I loved seeing all of the characters and how they interact with each other. I can't wait to see more of the game!
I'll be starting the writing of part 2 after a short break. Thanks for looking forward to it!
Holy crap that was good
Positively thrilling in fact
There isn't a single character I didn't warm to and that almost never happens
The dream scene had no visuals but it still made my heart flutter
Can't wait for the next part!
Ah, thank you for the compliments! As for the dream sequence, there will be visuals added later. I didn't have time for them during the jam T-T
Once I started playing this, I couldn't stop until I reached one of the pseudo-endings. I still need to get a the other three, but I. AM. IN LOVE. The art is fantastic to look at, the dialogue is so eloquently written, so many places literally had me laughing out loud. I really love how serious Jay is! But oh my... I think I am falling in love with Wren, especially after that dream flashback, so I am assuming I got on his route. It tugged my heartstrings. I'm a sucker for childhood friend routes lol. Here I thought it'd be different 'cause yo, Jay is a fantastic character, but then BAM! Wren's dream lol. Let's see what happens when I get the other 3 ends, but I thoroughly enjoyed Part 1 so far and looking forward to the second!
Thank you for appreciating Wren! I'm a little worried he'll be overshadowed by Jay in this part because of the nature of his interactions with Robin. He's got his good points, too!
Honestly you did well in crafting 2 really excellent guys!! Which I think is great, since it'll encourage players to really want all those endings, and not just for completion, but because it's gonna be amazing~ Jay is fun because of his unrest and banter with Robin, buuut, Wren has this special charm and the little "game" between him and Robin keeps me in suspense, like what will happen if Robin falters? Wren is quite smart, and has a high chance of winning against Robin methinks. It's all so well crafted for a simple story that takes place on a train!
I'm pretty fond of the bad ends (not to mention they give a little extra background on the plot and characters), so I hope you're right and people do seek them out!
As for Wren, well... a glimpse of how he would feel if Robin lost can be seen in his bad end.
Definitely gonna achieve all those ends later today! Your project was the one I looked most forward to this NaNo ^^
I appreciate it! I'll be playing some of the other entries over the next few days, so I'll let you know what I think of yours as well!
oh my lord, missy... im in love with jay... sobs
what can I say? I love snarky meganes :)
Loved Fetch Quest and really looking forward to this one!
Thank you! I hope you like this one as well!